Comment on Mikaela

I like how you did not just stick to facts about the book but also brought in present day information that helps add to your topic. Your opening on how everyone either consciously or unconsciously judges everyone and everything is a great start because not only is it true but it relates to Raskolnikov perfectly. He openly judges everyone he sees and he does not care who knows what he thinks while other characters do not judge other people so openly, like Raskolnikov's mother. I also liked your idea that everyone wants to believe what they want even if it is not the truth. Overall I thought your paragraph was informative and well written. :)